NDM essay: learner response
1) Copy and paste the email feedback (WWW/EBI/LR) into your blogpost. Question: The development of new/digital media means the audience is more powerful in terms of consumption and production. Discuss the arguments for and against this view. WWW: This is a really impressive essay – there is really sharp focus on the question and you’ve raised lots of relevant points, examples and statistics. There’s no doubt you’re pushing towards that A grade territory so now we need to replicate this in an exam situation. EBI: Arguably the most positive aspect here is that you’ve written a very strong essay and could still have added a lot more: David Simon and paywalls, Alain de Botton and Gramsci’s Hegemony (the illusion of power), Clay Shirky’s views on news, Baudrillard and hyper-reality. Indeed, I’d say the major aspect here is this reads like a Marxism and Pluralism essay. There’s nothing wrong with this – in fact it’s great that there’s the potential to push this even further! I see ...